Draft 3

This is our third draft. I think that the new beginning works really well with the genre, as the record player adds to the vintage look and feel of the video, as well as adding the sense of voyeurism as she is listening to her own record. The colourful letter magnets also add to the childlike, brightly coloured theme to the video, putting an emphasis on 'Ruby's youth. We have also added the toast section of our video, which will go right at the end when we have added all of our footage. We like this bit because it is again using stop frame animation, which adds to the quirky nature of the video. We have decided to sort out all the lip synching once the footage has all been added, as otherwise we will be wasting valuable editing time on something that we will only need to change again later.